All Comments on 'My First Chub'

by Chubbins

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Gross

Wrong section

ed4aded4adabout 7 years ago
When can we read the next chapter?

I really loved this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter

bhart1bhart1almost 7 years ago
Not bad!

You could make it even better by cleaning up the few errors, but all in all an enjoyable story. I hope you'll write more, and longer ones if you can manage them. 4 stars!

GrizzOH2018GrizzOH2018about 6 years ago
Hotness

Such a dream scenario. Very hot story.

NGAFUNNGAFUNover 2 years ago

Great Story! many more please!!!

bhart1bhart1about 2 years ago

I give you 4 stars for the pleasant and hot fantasy. The premise lends itself to a much longer read, though.

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