All Comments on 'My First Day of Freedom'

The chemistry was excellent here. Unfortunately there was a lot of switching between present and past tense, which was confusing. Overall really enjoyed.

I’m not sure what I was expecting given the way the first half of the story went but it surprised me and was very hot and sexy!

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Your bathroom scene with the environmental banter made me actually laugh out loud while turning me on. It was such a sexy genuine flirt. I really love how much personality you are able to portray in your writing. Thank you for the story.