All Comments on 'My First Girlfriend'

I just had to be a bit of a jerk here. So your boy Evan has a 6' cock huh? How does he even dress. I know you meant 6". Sorry, but it drew my attention, and made me laugh. Not a bad story though,

The writing was godawful, the author switched tenses like most people change underwear, and the spelling was laughable.

Actually, this was not a bad effort at all...it would have been twice as good if you didn't use "baby". Used way too often...shy guys don't do that....assholes do.

A good premise when the right 2-people hook-up. Definitely a feel good story and you got a lot of constructive criticism... My only neg. comment is that a newbie virgin guy that doesn't cum too soon the first time makes this a fairy tale. Still enjoyed it.

Enjoyable reading but I found the sex happened much to quickly for both virgins. There was no build up and they vocalized their sex like this was the hundredth time they got their sex parts together.