All Comments on 'My First Hooker'

by SciGuy

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
worth it

they start very quicly , she should enjoy him more ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
wow

this story is your best one yet. the way he just takes her..... brilliant. Don't stop writing, you have a skill!

Maybe in the future you could have longer sessions with this hooker. Well Done!!

YgraineYgrainealmost 15 years ago
Excellent writing

The story itself is a little short and needs more character development, but you have some very good literary skills.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userSciGuy@SciGuy
I've spent the last 35 years studying and working my butt off. Now I'm retired and it's time to have some fun. Hope to share some of my adventures with you, if I survive.