All Comments on 'My First Hotwife'

This one has potential, but it needs some more build up and a lot more description.

Brought back memories my virginity was lost to a married neighbour in her living room still can’t believe she took me!

This is exactly how I desire my wife to be and act, No cuck stuff, just a Hotwife...

Thanks

This one was edited better but still had a few issues. I liked the story line but would enjoy more details. This author really builds around the beginning of the story but tends to rush the sex. Not good. I want to see this stretched out and given more erotic details. I want to know how they are feeling and what they are wanting. I see a lot of potential in this author. Please edit though as it distracts from the story when it's not well written.

I loved the story but I agree with some of the above comments about needing more detail. One thing I would like to see in MANY stories is more follow up. In this case; How did husband and wife act afterward to each other and to him the next time they saw him?