All Comments on 'My First Journey from Home'

... didn't you proof read?

Some sentences I couldn't make out what you were trying to say!

Thanks for the feedback, Anonymous, and apologies for the errors. It's my first submission here and I must've got a bit carried away at the prospect of being published. I will try to rectify all mistakes asap. Hope you managed to enjoy the legible bits.....

I'll let you work out the wrinkles with the critics while I count the minutes before you submit the next chapter...

Thank you lonelyQuad. It'll be quite a few minutes I'm afraid - some time next week I hope. Very much looking forward to it...

I Was not ill, I would have cum too.