All Comments on 'My First Love - Again'

Continue please

I wanna see wat happens next

more please .. love it !!!!

Really good want more!!

yes please continue a really good start

Definitely want to know what happens next, great start!

Please post Part 2. A great first story. A suggestion (not a criticism) for you. Proof your stories for minor grammatical errors. Try reading your story out loud. That's an easy way to catch them or have a trustworthy friend proof. I look forward to more stories from you. Thanks. ChristieP

great start -let us now proceed

This was a good start. Please continue with the story.

Can't wait to hear what happens (after they dump the guys) :)

Please continue the story

Great story please continue! Hope the next chapter comes out soon!

The girls should just fess up and leave thier boyfriends, no point staying with someone you care nothing for.

Please continue the story. I like the descriptions of their interaction. It paints a nice scene :)

I love the way you describe the true passion between the two girls. I can feel the heat just reading it. Please continue.

please continue

look forward to the conclusion or continuing story

please continue!!

exceptional writing!!

omg please continue this. this was so good and got me so hot while reading it. i love how you described things. but please,if the girls get together, please dont let the boyfriends be involved

Awesome buld-up for the story. Can't wait to read more!

this a very good story.sweet and sensual.please give us the second part.cant wait to hear what happens next.please,please.

a very good start to a very good story. you should continue.

The story build-up is great!!

You should keep writing!!!

I'll be watching for the next one!! <3 :D

Nice story but "dose" is not "does", and more. Spell check doesn't quite do the job a good editor would.

I guess I like a story with more of a build up so it wasn't a favorite of mine.

Thank You Very Much For The Build Up

To The "KISS" !

But May We Have Chapter 2, Now. PLEASE