All Comments on 'My First Lover Ch. 02'

Just a little on the short side though

He is so lucky to get to fuck his mom, and for her to want him inside of her body. I love mom and son incest, it's the hottest kind of fantasy. Thanks for the great chapter......Rich

The story is good but desperately needs more dialogue. Mom and son need to have a clear dialogue, both in and out of bed.

The story is lacking in dialogue and that in turn diminishes the characters and the interaction between them. Makes for a difficult read.

Still waiting for character and plot development.