by sincerely_helene
How like a dream. Always teasing, rarely pleasing. Great descriptions and a delightfully disjointed string of happenings and thoughts. I really enjoyed it. The tuner/nipple combo was palpable. Yum! (I always try to go back to sleep and pick up where...) ;)
~lucky
Skillful use of imagery and metaphor. The clarinet scene was super sexy. Talk about making music! Gave it a 5.
Makes me want to take up the guitar again. Has an almost out of body experience feel to it. I might have to go take a nap. :)