by Kristi444
Great opening salvo, look forward to reading more about you and Alyssa soon.
Short fun read. Looking forward to your future submissions. Thanks for sharing!
Short piece, yet we get to know both characters, you more than Alyssa, but it is your story. Both are real/relatable. Liked the introspection which blended so well with how you brought the piece to a very erotic climax. Felt the intensity. Beautiful/well written. Thanks for sharing yourself with us. 5 stars.
I actually know a girl named Alyssa who's a lesbian. She's beautiful and her personality exudes happiness. I had a huge crush on her when I met her but never pursued anything because she and I are worlds apart (plus she has kids). Sadly she recently got a new job and I'll never see her again (not that it matters since we weren't friends).
OMG your writing is as sensual as you are. I am super aroused and slick and you did not even have sex......yet...... knowing you, makes the reading so much more authentic and intoxicating..... This is the one I picked first and I am glad I did..... you are a gifted writer and an amazing woman and as I write this I know you are getting ready to be with "Alyssa" again in a few minutes...... I am envious and yet happy for you my newest friend...... Abbi
Powerfully erotic. This is a writer who understands the art of hooking a reader and a soon-to-be avid fan.
Oh the thrill of discovery. Also… and you captured it well in this story… the joy of expanding an existing friendship to encompass and explore “possibilities”. You know, the often bantered about term “Friends With Benefits” really doesn’t adequately describe the joys the trust and comfort… and yes… love… both emotional and physical, shared when good friends engage with each other. This story hints at those feelings… especially the wonder of discovery. It’s titillating indeed. (No pun intended) <wink>
Written with such ease and conviction....You can't help but roll along with Kristi in her sexual adventure and the crossing over to the "dark side"! I was gripped by the trasnformation and redemptive nature of this account. So well written, so easy to read, and so erotic. Thank you.