All Comments on 'My First Threesome'

by Carson Dyle

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Hot Story

Nice one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice Try

A nice try for a first story - assuming it is your first - but a little too dense and unstructured for me. Sounds to much like a masturbation fantasy, whereas it would work better with a bit more suspense and little less suspenders!

Still keep at it mate!!

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