All Comments on 'My First Time'

by Blue_shoes1980

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fridayamfridayamover 14 years ago
So well-written

This is the best "first time" story I have read, and the sudden intrusion of choking is shocking and surprising. Lovely language and imagery too. Thank you.

Michael4567Michael4567over 14 years ago
Great Experience

Very good writing. Thanks for the imagery and the story.

DfrntLovinDfrntLovinabout 14 years ago
Bravo!

Very real, very well written,

Master_SupercockMaster_Supercockalmost 13 years ago
Excellent First Time

tale..seems like it went like most go, open honest and not sugar coated!

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