All Comments on 'My First Time'

by SweetSenorita

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mahagurudevmahagurudevabout 20 years ago
Well begun - but half done

Great beginning & build-up... but a rush to finish it off too early... a bit premature perhaps..??

SweetSenoritaSweetSenoritaabout 20 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for commenting. I'll take that into consideration- maybe do some revision.

SweetSenoritaSweetSenoritaabout 20 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for commenting. I'll take that into consideration- maybe do some revision.

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