by Puddin36
Being involved in a MMF is something I really fantasize about alot and really hope to experience someday. I thought the story was awesome, believeable and just enough to get my mind wandering and the juices flowing ( all the while wishing I were Sami!
Why did your change from the first person in the first 2 chapters to the third person in this chapter? Maybe it's just me but I find first person accounts much more exciting and believable. Quit playing like Bo Jackson and Bob Dole and please go back to the first person.
Having just had a 3 some I was able to relate to your story line nicely.... Keep them cumming... Your good...
I can picture myself right there. Where is a good lover when you need one? Guess it is the toy box again tonight. Thanks Puddin36