All Comments on 'My First Time Pt. 01'

You really are a wonderful, sensitive & sensual writer.

Thank you!

M

Really, a very good job at writing this. It was an honest and complete portrayal. There was no moralizing. The physical and emotional aspects were beautifully blended together.

This story certainly comes (!) across as being based on real-life experience. I'm just about to read part two - can't wait!

. . . very erotic . . . very well-written. Thanks for giving us a glimpse into a wonderful early sexual experience.

Love to read a good true story from another, much younger,Aussie of the opposite gender. It seemed so real I could almost smell it. Keep up the good work and I will be reading all of your experiences.

A welcome new writer. Keep up the good work and follow this up with the next chapter--soon.

Thanks so much for sharing your story. It's well written and it was so nice to read... Thank you.

Very, very good. You have a talent. Welcome to Literotica and please keep writing!

A fan from New York great story keep it up rao1345@hotmail.com

I didn't think it was too short at all, the story comes over as very real - sweetly and innocently erotic and beautifully written - and it loses nothing on a second reading! :-)

Peter x

too short...