All Comments on 'My First Time Pt. 01'

too short...

I didn't think it was too short at all, the story comes over as very real - sweetly and innocently erotic and beautifully written - and it loses nothing on a second reading! :-)

Peter x

A fan from New York great story keep it up rao1345@hotmail.com

Very, very good. You have a talent. Welcome to Literotica and please keep writing!

Thanks so much for sharing your story. It's well written and it was so nice to read... Thank you.

A welcome new writer. Keep up the good work and follow this up with the next chapter--soon.

Love to read a good true story from another, much younger,Aussie of the opposite gender. It seemed so real I could almost smell it. Keep up the good work and I will be reading all of your experiences.

. . . very erotic . . . very well-written. Thanks for giving us a glimpse into a wonderful early sexual experience.

This story certainly comes (!) across as being based on real-life experience. I'm just about to read part two - can't wait!

Really, a very good job at writing this. It was an honest and complete portrayal. There was no moralizing. The physical and emotional aspects were beautifully blended together.

You really are a wonderful, sensitive & sensual writer.

Thank you!

M