by sagarforsex
Beautiful. The next part of the uncle in the theatre please. Can’t wait to read your story
loved it..wish it had happened wit me exactly like that...mine was more rough and with a stranger
I could really get a sense for the situations and feelings of the characters. Granted the English was not perfect, but even the errors gave a sort of flavor to it being set in India and that the characters are not European/American. Great job! Thank you for taking the time and energy to write such a real, raw and well-spun tale.