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Rwa4768over 4 years agoGreat story, there is something very addictive about about a hard cock cumming in your mouth.
wylderosover 4 years agoYou write well but I think you could do better than the standard formula
These stories are so. predictable, right down to the cliches.
It would be great to see some genuine tension expressed through dialogue and action, rather than a long description of sexual contact that frankly, often resembles a description of plumbing.
A first foray is a bit more!
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