by Thomas_Lodge
Hey Thomas have loved this story so much, had plenty of oh-no-don’t do that Ty moments, unfortunately he has paid a very high price. More the line where you say Ryan and Tyler have drifted apart and aren’t close anymore, that bit is truly sad. Poor Steve, Austin too, but i feel for Tyler, young and without consideration for what might happen, and the worst did.
The end (which I hope you might write another book, your very very talented) I think is going to end with Tyler being by himself, lost Austin, Steve and Ryan. But has learned some very painful life lessons that will help him in the future. Ideally I like him to end up with Austin , but that’s me always wanting people to have a happy every after. Again awesome story Thomas. Thank you.
Love this…there is so much more to develop in these characters so please keep writing!
This story man... stopped reading multiple times just to take a breather throughout this chapter. Can't wait to see how this ends
Wow 😋😋😋
Excited so much 😉😇
When Ryan gonna get his revenge and fuck Tyler mercilessly for him being so slut and catfish his big brother 😉😋😇
So emotional,dramatic and hot chapter🔥I think Austin will propose marriage to Tyler at Mallory and Ryan's wedding😁
I totally agree with Hutchison. So sad that he and his brother are never close again, in their lifelong relationship. Steve is so hurt and vulnerable with Ty and I hope both of them learn to trust their gut feelings a bit more in future. I do hope Austin and Ty stay close in at least some way. Even though Austin is drunk he seams to understand what all happened in one short day.
Another fantastic chapter Thomas! The detail of the story and the development of the characters is brilliant! I feel like I’ve grown with Ty and Austin through all the twist and turns of their self discovery’s, absolutely love it. Its given me lots of “butterflies” along the way superb writing Thomas 😁. I do hope Ty and Ryan story can continue. Although with the marriage coming up I feel this is the end of there sexy fun. Can’t wait for the next chapter I feel Ty is about to experience his first orgy and used like a toy! I hope it goes well😁 fantastic writing Thomas the best story I’ve read🔥 love it! totally gripped 👍😁
Please find some way in an addendum to have Ryan and Ty become close again. I know in real life people don't forgive but this fucks up this story
Thanks so much for sharing your talent. I hope you keep writing for us. Whether this story or a whole new one. You are extremely talented and have enjoyed the twists and turns of this. Thanks again!
You should do a story of Tyler going through sophomore year at college after this!!! I’ve grown to attached to the characters
Thank you so much for the positive feedback and compliments.
The 23rd chapter has been submitted and shall be posted very shortly.
To respond to some of the comments, I agree, Tyler and Ryan drifting apart is one of the saddest part of the entire story. I just wanted to show that you can play with fire, but you have to be ready to face the consequences.
Thomas, even when you write the last chapter of this story, please, as long as you want it and it will be a pleasure for you, to continue writing stories. You are amazing and you are my favorite writer. Great job!🔥❤
This is an amazing story. You have made these characters come to life. In fact, there is a character on the TV series “General Hospital”, named Spencer. I see the actor’s face every time I read about Austin.
Please continue to chronicle the sexcapades of Tyler, Austin and Ryan.
Cheating never works out, even if they leave their other half for the one you are cheating them for you are not able to trust them and the you cheated on can never trust you again.
cheating will bite your ass sooner or later. doing a sneaky thing always end up in bad route. the catfish, the cheating. theres no success story born from betrayal of trust