All Comments on 'My Forest Nymph'

Great story, very thoughtful and loved the fact that the whole story was about seduction (who is seducing who: her, him or are they actually seducing you the reader?). My only suggestion would be to have tiny bit more of a lead in, as i found myself slightly distracted by trying to work out what had happened to result in this situation. Having said that, you'd have to careful not to lose the intensity by having too much of a lead in.