by flask817
It would have been more fun if he quietly taped his “ friends” during a subsequent session, so they would loose their hold over him.
Congrats
A worthy first effort, a quick cut-to-the-chase after a credible set-up, nice descriptions and well defined (distinct) characters. I would have enjoyed a few more details (location, finance's name - she functions as a fairly major 'background' to the story) and not so many 'amazing' utterances but overall nicely told.
I hope there will be a story about the POV of the four rapists and we'll find out that they really adore the MC.
Love it, totally agree with the comment that Henry has feelings! Would love to see how their relationship progresses now he’s married
I hope there is a story about the bitch getting revenge on his "friends" otherwise this just feels cruel.
I love that you didn't waste time with a long boring backstory and just got to the action. Someone mentioned that they wanted more details like the fiancés name but she's irrelevant. We all just wanted to read a fuck story and you delivered amazingly.