All Comments on 'My Friend'

by KayandDee

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BobNbobbiBobNbobbiover 12 years ago
The confusion of thinking . . .

. . . is very real. This seems like one case where the disjointed style of telling your story is appropriate. Husband says he doesn't want John to fuck Kathy, just wants him to want to fuck her. Implied but not as clearly stated is the requirement that Kathy also wants John to have sex with her. If the story went further, deeper, there might be another truth; hubby wants to be defied by either John or his wife.

Good story but still some on the table.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Watch you back

He will go for her anyway and it is all you fault you dumb shit. 2* for a not very good story that seemed to go nowhere at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Job

Good story, very authentic. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
?

I'm not trying to be mean. Maybe I'm just not smart enough to see it. But...Is there a story here? This just seems to be the ramblings of some guy who knows that his friend wants to fuck his wife, but hasn't as far as he knows. WTF

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A strange yet interesting perusal on the subject.

I enjoyed it, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WHAT A

pointless worthless waste of shit

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good Account

of a fairly common occurance among couples with very attractive wives, but it is extremely dangerous ground to walk on, unless you are a lot larger than 5;10" and very agressive.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 12 years ago
I got it

and I enjoyed it...a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What the fuck was that.

A wasted read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
don't mess with my poopchoot

dr slapped his behind, said you're gonna be special, my sweet little poopchoot

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
Strange Tale

The fact that they haven't screwed is strange enough. But then he asked permission?

Just a strange tale but I'm glad everyone was faithful.

Btrying2Btrying2about 2 years ago

I thought it highlights well how overly flirty behavior among friends can lead to divorces. The notion that my spouse is or will be ok with what has been happening so will not be upset with crossing that last line is very well reinforced here. The boundary expected by those who are married is under attack by one spouse's lackadaisical enforcement of it. Consequences will result if communication and better understanding is not forthcoming. However the story is well crafted, though seems a little rushed and lacking in needed detail.

Thanks for sharing. John

Rayjag1980Rayjag1980about 2 years ago

A strange story...

AnonymousAnonymous6 days ago

And then what happened, did he fuck her, or did they make love while you secretly watched?

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