All Comments on 'My Friends and My Milf Mom'

Keep it going. Finally a payback story.

While I consider bullying a sickness as bad as domestic abuse and look forward to Chad's revenge, you have to give us a bit more to set the hook.

Try to keep within the bounds of at least semi plausible reality.

An 18 y.o. who can afford a 2020 740i can afford an apartment and just leave.

Ditto for how long is it going to take for the nerd to become physically able to stand up to Blake? Is he really going to want to hang around for the abuse that long?

I appreciate the sentiment and will come back and rate this after I see more.

I hope part 2 is soon. :)

Thank you to all who have left constructive criticism. As i am sure you can tell this is my first time ever writing a story. Your proper feedback rather than just saying "its shit" tells me what needs to be done to improve it!! Part 2 will be longer and will be coming soon.

You begin this story with the mom and his "friend" untying him after they had sex on his bed. Where is the story of the friend seducing the mom then tying him (the son) up?

This is just a "filler" chapter between two potentially great chapters.

Just delete this too

I've found the original story, sorry for my confusion. As this story stand, it's very good. Is th here as part two coming?

Any time soon any update??

Excellent Beginning.

Not bad for a first-time writer. Looking forward to your next chapter/s. Take your time and please come up with a longer installments. Make the revenge long, slow and painful for the antagonists, i.e, the bully/friend and the slut mom. Just like you I think stories glorifying bullies are some of the worst ever and the 'mother cucking her son' genre is the most disgusting of all. The people who write and those who enjoy reading such garbage are pathetic, real life losers and need help, IMO. So, it just makes me happy when someone tries to reverse this genre.

We need more writers like you who can create stories in the revenge genre where the betrayed son fights back and takes revenge on bullies/fake friends and slut moms. There was another writer called A Fighter who wrote an alternate ending story to 'Soccer Mom and The Bully' and a couple of original stories where the hero fights back his bullies. Unfortunately he has not written much in many years. There are quite a few stories on Lit where the bullied guy gets his revenge in the end. Need more such stories. So, keep it up!!!

Good start

am I missing the beginning? Did Blake coerce the mom? Did mom seduce Blake? Is Blake Chad's bully? Did mom start fucking Blake so Blake won't kick Blake's ass anymore? Too many questions on how we got here. TERRIBLE start and too long of a wait for answers and part 2

So you have to cut your story short to a one page mini-series to coerce us into reading another chapter? Okay, I'll bite this once but the way you started your story wide open sucked. 1 itsee bitsee star

We're clean never getting a chapter 2

Please do a chapter 2

It is a shame the author did not continue the story.

You say next chapter that you never wrote probably for the best the way this story was wrote

@keki123 are you a idiot there was nothing about good in this story I mean seriously there was no beginning I mean how did it start why did it start The ending to this chapter needed work as well since it's clear the writer had no real plans to write another chapter it's clear he lied about it you really have to learn about what a good story calls for and this isn't it and there was no incest in this and the son was right she hated him this was a mother not a mom the writer needs to learn the difference between the 2

1 more comment this wasn't even a incest story the writer clearly doesn't know what incest is

@Mfkndragon GFYS

@keki123 you know im not even going to play your back and forth game like some child the fact you want to play really shows your not just a idiot but a retard you probably think this story is incest related though anyone with common sense which by the way clearly you nor the writer has can easily tell there was no incest involved in this story its either a mature story or even voyer but not incest so do everyone a favor before you open your mouth ever again grow a brain before you make everyone else around stupid