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Click hereWe can talk about Monday when I get back. I hope we can still be friends. I don't want to lose that too.
John.
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Anonymous8 months agoReally just not very well written, certainly not up to some of the same author's other efforts. I find some of the premise and content distasteful, but that just means I won't read it again and has naught to do with the author's work. This one felt rushed and disorganized.
Oatmeal19699 months agoThe ending was too simple, gentle and abbreviated for a btb/divorce story. Also, how has his wife not met his best friend?
The start of the story wasn't terribly smooth... more disorienting honestly.
More fun way to serve the divorce papers would have been for John to leave the envelopes on his desk at work, then take a sick day during Kim's day off. Ask Brad to bring the important envelopes to him at his house. Plus he can introduce his best friend to his wife.
Sorry, I rated it 1 star because stories where one spouse carelessly hurts the other for bonus sex are not arousing.
Medussa559 months agoSo she's so sorry? Sorry she got caught maybe or sorry she's losing everything or for the hurt she's caused but not sorry for doing it. As a serial cheater she may be able to hold it down for a few years but the urge will return and she'll cave in. Brad will see the signs and walk away and John can look forward to being stalked.
Another great idea for a story
Anonymous9 months agoI don't think Brad will go for it, now he and John have something in common, a cheating ex-wife, so I don't think Brad will go for it, even if he wanted to because he went through what John is going through. Can't really trust Kim, who's to say she won't do what she did with John to Brad, since there are too many red flags and Brad admitted to how he doesn't really know her. Those red flags will turn Brad away, even with John's blessing, John did state she had other lovers before Brad.
Comefindme11 months agoIt was pretty good until the ending, wants to stay friends but also endorses him being with the person that just nuked his and his kids lives? Felt so brutally unrealistic that it kind of shattered the whole story.
Imagine inviting your best bud over for a BBQ and he brings your ex wife that cheated on you with him and you just... Shake their hands? Odd play.
