All Comments on 'My Friend's Subconscious'

I wouldn't list this under non-consent honestly. Unless there's more to this story than what you've shown here. Her subconscious is interesting and hints that she's done hypnosis before in some for or another. Perhaps to help her study? Anyway it wasn't a bad short story. Thank you for writing it.

The very ending betrays the premise, but otherwise a lot of fun. She shouldn’t be okay with round two, that makes this whole ordeal pointless if he could have just asked her to fuck and she’d be fine with it.

Also just a small note, when someone is thinking a thought, make that its own paragraph, and put it in italics. Makes it easier for the reader to know this is a thought.

I wasn't entirely sure whether to put this in non-consent or not, but maybe I can beef up that aspect! As Anonymous said, the ending didn't really fit with the theme, if I was to do this again I would certainly change that up. And thanks for the paragraph suggestion! Great feedback guys! 😁