All Comments on 'My Friends Trip to Charleston'

The grammer was a little shakey and it started out a little wordie but it gave a touch of realism.

I would really like to know how true this is. If it is entirely fiction-you have a good imagination.

Loved the story! Definitly sounds like something I'd like to be in the middle of!!!!!!!!!!!

You brought in a lot of great detail and sex scenes, but it read a little distant- wording was a little removed from the actual scene

You have talent and imagination- let yourself go- try and get raunchy

Another hot story. Hope you write more. Thanks,