All Comments on 'My Gay Ex-Roommate Pt. 04'

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Anonymousover 5 years ago

Not feeling it

Going to be honest -- the first three entries of this story were VERY hot, and I thoroughly enjoyed them. This chapter, not so much. The actual sex scenes felt brief and glossed over, compared to the wonderful detail you gave in earlier chapters (which is initially what drew readers like me in), and going to stuff like Watersports in this chapter just further cheapened the plot.

I don't mean to sound unnecessarily harsh as I greatly enjoyed the first three chapters, but I hope that this isn't the route you want to go with this story

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

love these stories, although the acts of sex were passed over quickly in this one, all four parts are his journey down the dark rabbit hole. its awesome to hear from the subs perspective

ls2256 over 2 years ago

So very good.

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