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All Comments on 'My Girlfriend'

by frank11101_2004

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not Bad, Needs Work

This is totally my relationship!

But the writing is a little stilted and could use some more polishing. A good start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
enjoyed very much

very natural writing, as if it was talking to a friend...it made me wonder if this is a fantasy within a fantasy...

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