All Comments on 'My Girlfriend and Her Ex Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

These chapters are way too short

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Chapter was short, but why was Hailey suddenly worried about losing her boyfriend now? It sounds like she wants to move on, and she's only using Nicky; it's a little late to develope a soul. I expected nicky to cry, and Hailey to laugh at him for being a wuss.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

Curtcarls69Curtcarls69about 2 years ago

I am loving this story! Keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Really short chapters... is there more coming?

eightOeightseightOeightsabout 2 years agoAuthor

I'm working on chapter 5. Probably wont be out for another two weeks because of exams and vacation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This Story ist soooooo good. Write a next part, please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hey, we're still waiting for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great work really… Too bad there’s no continuation

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

If a pt 5 ever comes out I'm hoping our guy leaves her

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