All Comments on 'My Girlfriend and Her Mum Ch. 3'

I think that the girls should invite him over next weekend to stay but Dawn and Kelly start getting jealous a out who gets Chris the most. Then the mother and daughter take their seperate ways and try to steal chris from one another. So while Kelly is at school Dawn fucks Chris and when Chris a d Kelly sleep In the same bed Kelly starts to fuck Chris in the middle of the night. Finally Chris the ending of the chapter should be Chris getting one of the "Girls" pregnant during there "Sex Wars" and Chris become the Father of a new Kid named "Liam" I think Liam is a great name because I only know 4 Liam in my life and they Are all cool guys. Please make a chapter 4.

two for one equal five.a child each.

Good work. But to be more effective you need to get someone to edit your stories. It is just to distracting when reading your stuff that word usage is wrong as well as some spelling.