All Comments on 'My Girlfriend’s Smokeshow Daughter'

great. Perhaps it can subtly become a very committed and happy threesome.

Nice story!! Well written, but needs more. She's becoming a doctor and has great drugs that she uses once in a while...bring her mother into the mix, get them high on morphine and slam them both. Two lovers for the one...

Please continue. 5 stars.

Nicely done and looking forward to more....

Without a doubt, one of the best stories I've ever read, and I've read hundreds maybe thousands at this point. Keep up the great work. Please!

I dare you to do a follow up where they have to let mom know AND Cassie's pregnant!!!!

This is probably the best erotica I've ever read! Hope you continue this!

Outstanding! Hope to see more of your writing…

Hey Anonymous poster: challenge accepted in follow up story “Ex-girlfriend’s Smokeshow Daughter.”

Whew!

GREAT one...could have been pervy but they're both so sweet...

her SO hot description of watching him and her mom going down on each other, and her cumming at the same time-story hit a five right there!

the description of her body-multiple accidents 'just happen' in front of her and him packing same as the leading talent

so looking forward to follow-up....

Great story

This is probably every old man’s dream and I qualify. Well written and only one typo.