All Comments on 'My Girlfriend the Goblin Ch. 03'
by biidiibii
- 27 Comments
Anonymousover 3 years agoLike always, a good read. Though I'd like some more impregnation play if im being honest. Still thanks again and keep up the good work 😁👍
Anonymousover 3 years agoWell, I would say you have upped your game. I look forward to seeing where you take this. I like the way your showing the relationship developing. Thanks for your time and your imagination. 5 stars on this chapter.
Anonymousover 3 years agoMan this is hitting a lot of my own kinks so hard without even realizing it. More than that though, it’s a really sweet romance that I’m seriously enjoying. These two have great chemistry and I’m looking forward to more
Anonymousover 3 years agoGood story can't wait for more. Not a writer so I can't offer any constructive criticism but as a reader I like it, keep it up...
Cheeachaserabout 3 years agoI think that perhaps you do not particularly need any criticism in particular. Your grammar, spelling, and story so far are good.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoThis whole series so far is a nice little gem among the endless trash you can find on the site. Good writing, good, albeit relatively simple, characters, and smoking hot sex scenes. What more could I ask for? I've been checking checking for the next chapter constantly since I discovered this series
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoNicely done, well balanced story... I hope you have time to continue... your art shows much promise.
Anonymousover 2 years agoI really am enjoying what you've got going on here. I think they are cute. I can forsee this leading into something with the new girl but kinda hope it doesn't. They like each other so much there isn't room to share haha
Archangel_Mover 2 years agoI can't believe Lit didn't recommend this series to me before. Beautiful work! I can't wait to see more. I am honestly jealous of Jesse.
Just as a note of feedback, I would vote against any thoughts of a threesome in the next chapter. I adore the 'true love' thing that's building, and I think bringing in anyone else would kinda ruin it.
I am very much looking forward to Kaz'na realizing that Jesse recognizes her friend... and prying the truth out of him. That will be hilarious, I'm sure. <3
oldpantythiefabout 2 years agoThought it might be true love blossoming, but not sure where the introduction of Trigi is leading to. I was just enjoying the two of them together. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks
Anonymousover 1 year agoI was hoping for true love but with a pornstar friend it looks like its headed in another direction.
Anonymous10 months agoBeautiful story! It’s been a long ass time since an update though.. I hope you’re doin okay.
Jacktacular5 months agoWow what a freaking cliffhanger. Here lays the problem with amateur writers, life happens and stories go in finished. Like those before me I to hope the author comes back to finish this tale.
shadracht5 months agoHere's to hoping this gets returned to. It's interesting, but I'm not wanting to get too invested if it's never going to be finished.
