All Comments on 'My Girlfriend... the Slut?'

Everything happened too quickly; one moment Tim was the angry boyfriend looking to punish his cheating girlfriend and she was crying for forgiveness, the next she was in control and he became the chastised cuckold. The whole thing could have been stretched out more with extra detail, more emotion and some dialogue, but it is what it is and that's the author's prerogative.

Actually I enjoyed the story regardless of brevity, a cruel but hot woman, her submissive and willing, but unsure cuck and the arrogant lover, the classic ingredients for this type of story. It was well written and an easy read but sadly in this category destined to be marked unfairly low.

Maybe as an experiment write the same scene but this time have Tim beat Jake to a pulp, slap Grace around then kick her out with no money and no clothes, then watch the praise and five stars roll in... Or stick to your guns and carry on writing what you enjoy.

Five stars from me and I hope we get something more in depth next time.

This story put me realy hard!!! More about it please!

5 stars.

I surely hope that this is not "THE END" of this story.

Loving this, hope you post more soon. It was at least different from all the other cuck stories.

Thanks for sharing,

What a lucky man! I need a little whore like this perfect girl!

One of the better new cuckold / cheating girlfriend stories ive read in a while. I love cheating girlfriend stories and this one is written uniquely and unexpected. When he walks in angry and shes calling him her lovers name, i thought “okay cool its going to be a dominant man taking control back story, turned on by her dirty talk” then it totally switches and she pussy whips and cuckolds him! How ? Power of the pussy! And to top it off he gets to hear her get slammed all night, i hope she makes him eat her cum filled pussy next story! Look forward to more!

It resonates with me because it has elements of my real life experiences. Brought back vivid memories of the Sublime, Conflicted, torturously thrilling erotic moments from years back. Searching for another faithful, cheating, slut companion ...

Cheers!

Yeah!

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I love your story.reminds me of the pleasure I got watching my wife fuck and going sloopy seconds.

Do men this pathetic and whipped really exist?

Wow that was hot Def needs a part 2

What a fucking whimp