All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Best Friend'

It was all over the place. And judging from the details in this story you have never fucked a virgin.

Its clear that you don't really know what your talking about. The entire story was ridiculous. Your writing style reflects your lack of education and the fact that you spend too much time watch crappy television. I am embarrassed that I even read half of it.

That was hilarious. Rock on.

Honestly, I'm not sure if this was serious or a parody. If it was a parody, it sort of worked. There were some nice over the top lines.

If it was meant to actually arouse... I'd suggest putting more detail into it. The story was way too ambitious for how short it was.

You lost me after I read this "I pushed it in farther, breaking her fragile hymen." What kind of crap is that? The hymen is at the front when I pop a girl it isn't after I "push further" in. It is as I push in. Little dick guys need to stop making up stories of big dicks. You guys know nothing about it

Has to be one of the worst stories I have ever read on this site....

As much as I want to encourage you to keep going after that shocking start I dont think I will...are you even old enough to write this kind of story...

Deep inside her womb with a 7 inch dick ?....popping viagra ?

Sorry...but I cant find anything positive about it.

Sounds like it was written by a virgin teenager with poor writing skills