All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Gang Bang!'

Not a story...

It is funny how people with no morals seems to find each other, in stories as in real life.

I wonder if it is in the Genes, or pheromones?

I am not that educated and seems like I have forgotten a lot that I have learned.

But, you can do better writing. Some helpful tips are:

1. Write your story and wait a day or two and read it again. Read it out loud to see if it sound funny.

2. Have a friend or one of the editors here this site read it.

Keep writing and you will improve.

While pretty much none was exhibited by characters depicted, the anon comment contained probably the best kernel of wisdom for the day:

"people with no morals seem to find each other..."

A hat tip for the cogent observation.