All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Little Brother'

Great build up, but please tell us how this develops; I'm certain that Derek has plenty of cum to satisfy both Emily and Bryce!

dam I wish I was one of those two guys

Don't stop at 2 pages! This story begs for follow-up of GF's little bro, Bryce, to put more moves on the bigger Lacrosse BF, Derek, after initial BJ. The bigger Derek needs Bryce's meat up his virginal chute. And Bryce has the staying power to give Derek a pounding and a hands-free orgasm. Keep Writing this is a very good story. Thanks for your efforts in giving us this story/

Gosh, after this first heated round, Bryce and Derek need to continue their connection. Let Derek make a small overture toward Bryce, or maybe Bryce can run his hands ever so gently over Derek's (hopefully) hairy chest and abs, and suck that cock again. Derek's got loads of cum built up that he can shoot into Derek's mouth or ass. How about it??

Very hot story. I would love to wake up with that dilemma!

Great story, but you need to write more to find out what is going to happen between Derek, and Bryce.....Why is it the straight guy lays there, but is more than happy with the attention he is getting.....poor Bryce is left high, and dry which is typical of a straight guy....

Develop this story. Since the lax jock's girlfriend will not put out in her parents' house and he is walking around hard all day, have him and Bryce agree to have Bryce blow him each night. On the last night, have Bryce suck dick, then move down to suck balls, then move down to rim the college jock, then add a little lube and have the high school wrestler fuck the virgin ass of the college lax jock. Send him back to college craving more cock up his hot jock butt.

Brilliant build up, very believable, so hot I was hard the whole time. You've left us wanting more. Please, please, please can they fuck in the sequel?

I hope you make a sequel of aftermath of that night, I'll wait tho

this story needs more......

But i found that ending kind of funny!

I was so disappointed it ended at two pages, but you did what you set out to do! WOuld love to see more- should you have more up your sleeve with these two

Ooo.This story has started so sweet.She make me dreaming to i be Emily. They are so sweet couple.So lovely,so sweet,so in love,so kind,so...sexy.I felt very bad that Derek cheated on Emily and now their relationship will fall apart. I want them to be together and have no problems like this or any other. I want them to be happy. I also want to be in Emily's place. Derek is such a cool guy not only in appearance but also in character.☺😋I want to be his boyfriend, we would have sex while we were in the toilet. If they had sex this would not have happened. I would have loved him. Why are there no boys like him in real life.😍🤤If there was a story only about derek and emily (no infidelities and problems but only happy moments, kisses, walks, sex, cuddling, and so on) I would read it several times a day💯