All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Neglected Mother'

Well writ! Kudos!

Two for one! What more could you ask for?

Good story. Loved the mother/daughter acceptance of the relationship. I appreciate you and your Muse's skills. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Ever mans dream

Good plot and presentation, but too much oversights, such as

I pulled out of her, rolled onto my back. She got on her knees, swung a leg over my calves (you probably meant 'shins'. Also referring to Jenny's mother as Mr. Hollins, when she stwpped in on them having sex just before the wedding.

The excessively long utterances of Mrs. Hollins's joy during sex was also a distraction.

4 stars

Love the way mother and daughter lay out naked on the yacht and spread lotion over each other. I think soon Michael will be joining them there and penetrating the two ladies on the deck as his father-in-law steers the ship above them...

Fabulous

Just skipped Mr. Hollis being out of town and went into the asking for daughters hand would have been nice to have told what happened at home while he was gone. Great story however and really deserves a few more chapters.

Amazing story!!!

When the word sharing enters the picture; one wonders if they intend to do so at the same time. A scene where Theresa teaches Jennie her Kung Fu Kegel technique might well bump the score up.

"Can he live with this?" Sure, but for how long?? Is there a pet cemetery out back where they keep past, dearly departed boyfriends? Sacre' merde...

Anon56

You coaxed five stars from me with this story. I only wish there were more stories with mrs Hollis.

What a lucky trio of highly sexually motivated open minded people. Mrs. Hopkins was written so beautifully. Throughout the story I was wondering if both Jennie and her Mom were manipulating Micheal towards an open relationship once it was decided he was the one.

To bad there aren't more stories involving Mrs. Hollins..

Loved it! 5+ Stars

Not bad

Great story, love it. AAAAAA++++++

One of the best I've read, very sensious .

I was with them all the way.

Well done !

I absolutely LOVED this story. An easy 5 stars!! An effort of this length rarely is as erotic as this from beginning to end. But this was an exception as I was blue steel hard throughout. PLUS I don't know why but when Jennie was sucking his cock on the boat I laughed out loud at the GWAC GWAC GWAC GWAC description as he throat fucked her. I didn't need the comedic relief but there it was regardless. Thank you, Mary. Now onto one of the other 124 MA efforts.

Classy, sexy, and ````FUNNY! What a nice surprise… usually something stinky spoils it al! 1,000 marks and thank you very much!!

I just imagine them both being pregnant with each other baby brother and sister by the boyfriend

That was pretty hot. Would love to see a sequel to it.

Great story but why stop there, there’s so much more to this story

Good fun story of a young man's dream.

Good thing this is fiction, because based on the descriptions of Mrs Holland as to her appearance, fitness, horniness, and sexuality, it is difficult to believe that she has the done without sex for several years.

Mr Hollins is a great character. Sometimes he is comic relief, other times a regular guy. Either he is clueless, or he has come to terms with his own sexual condition, and is knowingly helping his wife find a substitute.

Mr. Holland must be clueless because no real man would ever share his wife no matter the circumstances.

And going years without sex is doable if you love your spouse. Most people in real life aren’t as ruled by sex as these stories would have you believe. O.K. for fantasy but that’s all.

Bill S.

Great Story!!

Wish this story was illustrated with true to life photos

There will be many porno or Substitute Ameture girls willing to play the parts

Very good story, thanks for sharing it with your fans

Nicely done

This is the first of your stories I ever read and since then I have read almost all of them your writing is amazing thank you so much for sharing. Eddieemorris@aol.com

Phenomenal story! Love the class of description, the tease & the detail of the build up. Beautifully written - I cannot wait to read more from you. Not my typical genre but mmmmm your writing made a convert. I could NOT stop reading & I dreaming I was watching this all unfold 😈

I loved this story. Finally a writer that shows respect for the women. Very nicely done!

In your last update, you asked about a story needing a sequel and I think this is most deserving. The dynamics of Michael relationship with both women and what happens if Mr. Hollins health takes him totally out of the picture?

This was a fun and sexy story. An enjoyable read.

One minor correction to make: In the 5th to the last paragraph of the story you write "Mr. Hollins (licks cum off her fingers)..." when you clearly meant to write, "MRS. Hollins (did a nasty, sexy, beautiful thing...).

Great work. I like that the kids are actually in love.

i can only give you 5 stars, sorry .

STUNNING! MY NEW FAVORITE WRITER!

Will you be my Mrs. Hollins? 😉

Well done. A great writing job.

Oh I loved this, really well thought out, great descriptions and characters that felt real.

What a wonderful, sexy story!

Mary Anderson is a very god writer. Why is she doing short erotica pieces insted of writing complete books or novella's ?

Really well written. If this is the longest fiction you’ve done, I seriously suggest you start stretching your talents longer. And not necessarily just erotica.

Great story, great writing. I think thee should be more after-the-wedding stories, like a honeymoon trip for the three of them, etc.

What a lucky bastard, well, that's some fantasy at its best I think, very well written, leaving plenty of room for more good interactions, this could go on for much much longer. 5*.

Great story, loved reading it.

Damn, that was hot! I need more.

Hot AND intelligent!

Thankyousoverymuch!

Great story. Much better written than most everything on here.

It's a close call between who is sexier; mom or daughter. Both of them have the same erotic qualities any man wants in his lover. I'm not particularly impressed with them dressing alike but that's a minor flaw. It would seem that post-wedding there's bound to me a scene or two involving mother and daughter and the two of them double-teaming the husband/son-in-law. My only question is can Jennie and her mom being satisfied with only one fuck partner?

It's a great story but if the women wants for this relationship between all three to work the daughter has to be honest and not lie to her new husband because I think she cheated on him with that college boy because when they had a video chat she was nude under the covers even he found that strange. I am sure if there are more parts to this story you will see that the daughter did cheat and will probably plan a mfm

Incredibly hot!!

Great story, very well written. The sex was hot and done nicely.

A great scenario, well written,pity that the surname changed on page two Hollins became Collins for a couple of paragraphs, a good proofreading would have noticed those errors.

Mrs Collins x 3 ?

Totally hot 🥵. My temperature rose and my watch is asking if I’m alright because it knows I’m not moving about and my heart rate just went through the roof. This is going in my keepers section for sure.

Bill S.

Great story but it needs seriously good artwork to accompany this tale. The kind of art that is Marvel or DC Comics level talent. I have seen the illustrated stories on this site and very few art are good and the computer generated art are terrible, looks as if it was from the '90s or the '00s.

Too short to savor all the flavor. A bit too many typos but such a HOT topic and follow through!

This was a very dirty (fun dirty) and nasty (fun nasty) story well told and thoroughly enjoyable !

Five stars, a follow, and a hope that there are more parts to come in the future.

Yes, there were a couple of typos and obvious spell-check word substitutions, but not enough to do more than suggest a proofread by someone else to catch them before posting.

Looking forward to more of your stories.

Excellent story, uniformly hot throughout. Another chapter could make a pleasant continuation of their relationship while the newlyweds are living in the mother in law house.

Really enjoyed this story. I’d love to read more about them. I would really love to read about him impregnating both his new wife and his new mother-in-law!

This is the hottest story I have ever read!

Amazing story!! Loved the attention to detail! Thank you!!!!

Loved it.

Not bad.

Final scene, there is a slip in which mom was referred to as 'Mr. Hollins' instead of 'Mrs.'

Blistering hot mother and daughter. Married life will be a lot of fun for them both, and Michael.

Truly excellent writing! Certainly one of the best I've ever read!

Incrediblby hot. Needs a post-honeymoon chapter. Great stuff!

fabulous written like only a woman could.

I really enjoyed that. Smart women are such a turn-on.

Fab story. Would love to hear the follow on please

Great story! But too many typos.

LeB

Prefect as expected. Loved that you also didn't slip into the incest but kept it clean. <3

well done

This is SUN HOT!