All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Neglected Mother'

This was probably as realistic as this purely "porn fantasy" trope can get. It's to rare to have a mother - daughter combo story that has good characters. This one managed it.

This is SUN HOT!

well done

Prefect as expected. Loved that you also didn't slip into the incest but kept it clean. <3

Great story! But too many typos.

LeB

Fab story. Would love to hear the follow on please

I really enjoyed that. Smart women are such a turn-on.

fabulous written like only a woman could.

Incrediblby hot. Needs a post-honeymoon chapter. Great stuff!

Truly excellent writing! Certainly one of the best I've ever read!

Blistering hot mother and daughter. Married life will be a lot of fun for them both, and Michael.

Not bad.

Final scene, there is a slip in which mom was referred to as 'Mr. Hollins' instead of 'Mrs.'

Loved it.

Amazing story!! Loved the attention to detail! Thank you!!!!

This is the hottest story I have ever read!

Really enjoyed this story. I’d love to read more about them. I would really love to read about him impregnating both his new wife and his new mother-in-law!

Excellent story, uniformly hot throughout. Another chapter could make a pleasant continuation of their relationship while the newlyweds are living in the mother in law house.

This was a very dirty (fun dirty) and nasty (fun nasty) story well told and thoroughly enjoyable !

Five stars, a follow, and a hope that there are more parts to come in the future.

Yes, there were a couple of typos and obvious spell-check word substitutions, but not enough to do more than suggest a proofread by someone else to catch them before posting.

Looking forward to more of your stories.

Too short to savor all the flavor. A bit too many typos but such a HOT topic and follow through!

Great story but it needs seriously good artwork to accompany this tale. The kind of art that is Marvel or DC Comics level talent. I have seen the illustrated stories on this site and very few art are good and the computer generated art are terrible, looks as if it was from the '90s or the '00s.

Totally hot 🥵. My temperature rose and my watch is asking if I’m alright because it knows I’m not moving about and my heart rate just went through the roof. This is going in my keepers section for sure.

Bill S.

Mrs Collins x 3 ?

A great scenario, well written,pity that the surname changed on page two Hollins became Collins for a couple of paragraphs, a good proofreading would have noticed those errors.

Great story, very well written. The sex was hot and done nicely.

Incredibly hot!!

It's a great story but if the women wants for this relationship between all three to work the daughter has to be honest and not lie to her new husband because I think she cheated on him with that college boy because when they had a video chat she was nude under the covers even he found that strange. I am sure if there are more parts to this story you will see that the daughter did cheat and will probably plan a mfm

Great story. Much better written than most everything on here.

It's a close call between who is sexier; mom or daughter. Both of them have the same erotic qualities any man wants in his lover. I'm not particularly impressed with them dressing alike but that's a minor flaw. It would seem that post-wedding there's bound to me a scene or two involving mother and daughter and the two of them double-teaming the husband/son-in-law. My only question is can Jennie and her mom being satisfied with only one fuck partner?

Hot AND intelligent!

Thankyousoverymuch!

Damn, that was hot! I need more.

Great story, loved reading it.

What a lucky bastard, well, that's some fantasy at its best I think, very well written, leaving plenty of room for more good interactions, this could go on for much much longer. 5*.

Great story, great writing. I think thee should be more after-the-wedding stories, like a honeymoon trip for the three of them, etc.

Really well written. If this is the longest fiction you’ve done, I seriously suggest you start stretching your talents longer. And not necessarily just erotica.

Mary Anderson is a very god writer. Why is she doing short erotica pieces insted of writing complete books or novella's ?

What a wonderful, sexy story!

Oh I loved this, really well thought out, great descriptions and characters that felt real.

Well done. A great writing job.

Will you be my Mrs. Hollins? 😉

STUNNING! MY NEW FAVORITE WRITER!

i can only give you 5 stars, sorry .

This was a fun and sexy story. An enjoyable read.

One minor correction to make: In the 5th to the last paragraph of the story you write "Mr. Hollins (licks cum off her fingers)..." when you clearly meant to write, "MRS. Hollins (did a nasty, sexy, beautiful thing...).

Great work. I like that the kids are actually in love.

In your last update, you asked about a story needing a sequel and I think this is most deserving. The dynamics of Michael relationship with both women and what happens if Mr. Hollins health takes him totally out of the picture?

I loved this story. Finally a writer that shows respect for the women. Very nicely done!

Phenomenal story! Love the class of description, the tease & the detail of the build up. Beautifully written - I cannot wait to read more from you. Not my typical genre but mmmmm your writing made a convert. I could NOT stop reading & I dreaming I was watching this all unfold 😈

This is the first of your stories I ever read and since then I have read almost all of them your writing is amazing thank you so much for sharing. Eddieemorris@aol.com

Nicely done

Very good story, thanks for sharing it with your fans

Wish this story was illustrated with true to life photos

There will be many porno or Substitute Ameture girls willing to play the parts

Great Story!!

Mr. Holland must be clueless because no real man would ever share his wife no matter the circumstances.

And going years without sex is doable if you love your spouse. Most people in real life aren’t as ruled by sex as these stories would have you believe. O.K. for fantasy but that’s all.

Bill S.

Good fun story of a young man's dream.

Good thing this is fiction, because based on the descriptions of Mrs Holland as to her appearance, fitness, horniness, and sexuality, it is difficult to believe that she has the done without sex for several years.

Mr Hollins is a great character. Sometimes he is comic relief, other times a regular guy. Either he is clueless, or he has come to terms with his own sexual condition, and is knowingly helping his wife find a substitute.

Great story but why stop there, there’s so much more to this story

That was pretty hot. Would love to see a sequel to it.

I just imagine them both being pregnant with each other baby brother and sister by the boyfriend

Classy, sexy, and ````FUNNY! What a nice surprise… usually something stinky spoils it al! 1,000 marks and thank you very much!!

I absolutely LOVED this story. An easy 5 stars!! An effort of this length rarely is as erotic as this from beginning to end. But this was an exception as I was blue steel hard throughout. PLUS I don't know why but when Jennie was sucking his cock on the boat I laughed out loud at the GWAC GWAC GWAC GWAC description as he throat fucked her. I didn't need the comedic relief but there it was regardless. Thank you, Mary. Now onto one of the other 124 MA efforts.

One of the best I've read, very sensious .

I was with them all the way.

Well done !

Great story, love it. AAAAAA++++++

Not bad

Loved it! 5+ Stars

What a lucky trio of highly sexually motivated open minded people. Mrs. Hopkins was written so beautifully. Throughout the story I was wondering if both Jennie and her Mom were manipulating Micheal towards an open relationship once it was decided he was the one.

To bad there aren't more stories involving Mrs. Hollins..

You coaxed five stars from me with this story. I only wish there were more stories with mrs Hollis.

"Can he live with this?" Sure, but for how long?? Is there a pet cemetery out back where they keep past, dearly departed boyfriends? Sacre' merde...

Anon56

When the word sharing enters the picture; one wonders if they intend to do so at the same time. A scene where Theresa teaches Jennie her Kung Fu Kegel technique might well bump the score up.

Amazing story!!!

Just skipped Mr. Hollis being out of town and went into the asking for daughters hand would have been nice to have told what happened at home while he was gone. Great story however and really deserves a few more chapters.

Fabulous

Love the way mother and daughter lay out naked on the yacht and spread lotion over each other. I think soon Michael will be joining them there and penetrating the two ladies on the deck as his father-in-law steers the ship above them...

Good plot and presentation, but too much oversights, such as

I pulled out of her, rolled onto my back. She got on her knees, swung a leg over my calves (you probably meant 'shins'. Also referring to Jenny's mother as Mr. Hollins, when she stwpped in on them having sex just before the wedding.

The excessively long utterances of Mrs. Hollins's joy during sex was also a distraction.

4 stars

Ever mans dream

Two for one! What more could you ask for?

Good story. Loved the mother/daughter acceptance of the relationship. I appreciate you and your Muse's skills. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Well writ! Kudos!

GREAT STORY!! With a perfect ending, nothing like keeping it in the family for all to share.

So fucking hot! I just wished there was more when the three of them were in bed!! Five stars and a favorite point!

WHEN IS CHAPTER 2 COMING OUT ?

Fun story. Being a husband myself, I would have liked it better if the husband was an able and active participant in this story. He doesn’t need to be inadequate or a terrible lover for this story to be hot. He could have showed up while Theresa and Michael were having sex and to Michael’s surprise and embarrassment and confusion shown to be quite adequate and a willing and capable participant. But still a great read. Thanks for sharing.

A great story. Loved it.

There's only one perfect thing that's missing from this storyline........ a 2nd, maybe a 3rd chapter please

NICE good read

Hot. Volcanic hot. Hades hot.......... I think it would be fair to say I enjoyed your work. Thank you.( I can't believe someone commented " ok " !

ok...

a dream come true!...

they're both, as you've painted them, walking dreams...no jealousy, equal sharing...

tho had hoped at least the mom would have a proper adult woman's muff...would have been too much to hope daughter was down with going natural

easy 5, and fave

HOT SHIT! Well done. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

"Living the Dream" as I recall dating this one blonde in high school and when i met her Redhead mom I was instantly harder for mom then even the hot little 16 year old daughter. Later i would see her in her bathing suit as she accompanied us to the local pool as I felt like King of the Hill as the escort of these two beautiful women. The dad was similar to the father in this story and often wondered if all the flirting the mom had done would end up like this story. Sadly the mom and dad ended up divorcing and the daughter went on a binder of rebelliousness doing drugs and went way to wild and caused us to breakup as then she went to sleeping with any guy around especially if he had drugs. So I never got to have this as i always wanted and the closest I got was when i was screwing one older lady and the sister had discovered us and as round one was finishing the sister slid in bed with us asking for her turn and as the first sister just smiled stroking me asking me if i was ok with it as it had always been their fantasy to sleep with the same guy. So I got to have my first of many threesomes and got very little sleep over he next day as i always had one sister in bed or one getting me ready to go another round with the other. Isn't it every man's dream to have this

Far and the best I've ever read,,,5+

Outstanding !

Wonderful, wonderful story...I agree that a second chapter, at least, is needed (to carry on at least some of the family background)...

Five **5** Stars!!

When I started this piece, I thought I had read it before, but as I got into it I changed my mind. A great storyline, well written with good grammar. Make sure your proofer reads it slow. A couple of errors, but nothing big, as the story read well. Yes, I would agree with those asking for more chapters. Now that Mom had a taste of Michael, even with a threesome always available, the girls may have some friction between them over availability. Also, there has been no mention of his family. Maybe an older sister, who trained him originally, wants back in the line-up. Then there is the breeding thing, and does Mom get knocked up? Or maybe non of the above. It's your call, MaryAnderson. Great job! Keep writing.

XYZ

I would really like a part 2 to this story. there is so much i can see in this future. Think about it. Thanks

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Hot AF!!!

And I would like, if both becoming pregnant at the same time.

Whew, that was amazing! I agree with Kijn91, a top story! Really hot and so well-written. Older women always fascinated me even while being loyal to my younger wife! Keep writing!

One of the best stories I have ever read on this website. Keep up the good job.

One of the best authors I've found on here! Keep it going!

VERY hot story. I sure hope there's more to come soon. Maybe the honeymoon vacation for the 3 of them. Thank you for a great story and please keep them coming. 5 stars indeed.

Awesome story!

(12/4/2021) Excellent! This was one of the best short stories I've read on this site and is now on my favorites list. I only spotted one hiccup close to the end when you wrote Mr. instead of Mrs. Hollins. 5 stars of course.

only one quibble...would have been so much hotter if mom and dot both had muffins, rather than bald...