by Lugus
I surpose some people enjoy this. A weak, no confidence, door-mat of a guy... with a cheap slut girlfriend who cheats and fucks other guys without him (officially) knowing. Yeah, a match made in heaven. NOT.
Yet you came to a sex site,read every word then act so put off.Go read a kids story if you so dislike these stories.Get a life.
Your "hero" may be a cuck, but give him some self-respect--if only to tell his GF that they can be friends only, and that she can get her sex quotient from anyone but him.
should write the whole story first and then start publishing. especially if you are a newbie to writing. nobody follows if it takes you 2 years for a follow up and then it's not even thought through. part 2 was not erotic at all, while part 1 had it's points.
Erotic, but sad too. Dump her. I’d be tempted to upload the video to YouPorn. Send the link to her family. But maybe that would just get you in trouble. She obviously has little respect for you, if she didn’t tell you of her kinky needs.
We still don't have the end of the story.
The end as I see it can only be one of three things: (1) The narrator is a true cuckold who can only be satisfied by seeing his significant other fuck someone else (and there's nothing wrong with that, as Seinfeld might say -- being cuckolded is actually my favorite fantasy, that and being bi/gay bottom to my s.o.'s top); or (2) he is satisfied with her explanation after he has confronted her with the evidence, however improbable; or (3) he is not satisfied and sets out to prove it. In case (3), you are basically starting a new story from scratch, with either a narrator who has learned that he is irremediably cuckold material or successful in being able to sustain a relationship with someone who will not cuckold him.
I will understand if you don't want to start over at this late date...
Girlfriends.. Well, at least he's not married to her or engaged. that would put a whole different light upon the subject. Obviously, She's seeing other men albeit behind his back but then again, maybe she set him up with asking him to help her with her computer...after all, they aren't living together. And when he looked through the lingerie shop's window and she was looking right at him... She knows he's watching her...
you are neither attractive nor intelligent, except perhaps in your own mind. find something else to do.
The main character is a spineless cuck, she cheats with multiple guys and he just watches. Mutiple chances to call her on it and passes on it instead. Not disgusting, rather, just sad. Has he no pride at all?
Pity there is no part 3 ... or 4, would love the read more about the cheating slut and her adjusting boyfriend.
"""""""The smug smile on the guy's face infuriates me. I can see that he says something, but I can't hear it through the window. """"" So how did he suddenly hear all the insults, etc. the guy heaped on her??
Great story. The narrator enjoying eating her pussy was great, and the girl being taken by the stud was even better. I'd love it if you post more, but even if you don't, thank for your excellent work.