by rubysen
Exciting! Specially for using the native language. Would have been better putting more worrds of "moaning" (Shi-t-kar) with native language(Chod-re --, amar shaawa- fata ye de--). Very exciting for people who knows that native language --
want more--
It really was a cool story.
The build up was fantastic
Keep writing
Ravi
Ruby, nicely written and liked the seduction of the nephew. Enjoyed the story and like your style what with a little Bengali thrown to add more spice.
Excellent.Your slow build up with all the doubts and uncertainties was so convincing.Added to that the language contrasts were brilliant - not just the Bengali and the paraphrased thoughts of Meena but Indian English is so effective for a seduction scene.It is a little more formal than either Australian English,American English or even British English, and the courtesy/reserve of your hero somehow fits that to make a very potent mix.Very well done.
You even seem to share my love of hairy women!
This is hot. I just loved the content. It was really natural as this is the way it happens in real life also.
Simply the best ! ! ! !
Unlike other Indian writers, the buildup is slow and highly erotic.
This could be a great way to learn Bengali.
May your pen never cease writing and may your tribe increase.
dear ruby
i have become a dedicated fan of you
your writing has impressed me a lot
they are kinky as well as sensual and have touched my heart
please keep writing and giving us pleasures
your :Adorable Woman Pt. 01" did not followed by part-02
please complete the series
waiting for your submission
your adoring fan.............
Hi Ruby, that a geat story. Wow!! Enjoyed it thoroughly and I cummed copiouly after reading it. Thanks.
you've proved that bongs are the ultimate horny women of india ! lovely !
You are the best on literotica. I love to read your stories. Please write more stories. I always check your page to see if something new is available.
Keep your good work.
Being a bengali,22,recently passed out engineer and male and sorrounded by gorgrous aunts all over, you ,kakima;-)have written about my favourite fantasy. Thanx a lot for ur story. Bengali quotations, like yu said ,were hot.Thanx a lot also for not including any crude dialects and Bengali slangs since personally for me its a huge turnoff. Can't wait to read the rest of yur stories.Love,Indranil.
good but it needs more phisical action,more sex and stuff if u know what i mean.
A well written story, I enjoyed it and envy “Babu” It seems, from these stories and stories from other Indian writers, that incest in India is far less forbidden than here in the West. Is that correct?