All Comments on 'My Gorgeous Aunt'

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SensibleSensibleabout 20 years ago
Loved it

Great story. I'd appreciate more bengali ones

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
very good !

Exciting! Specially for using the native language. Would have been better putting more worrds of "moaning" (Shi-t-kar) with native language(Chod-re --, amar shaawa- fata ye de--). Very exciting for people who knows that native language --

want more--

RAVIGULERIARAVIGULERIAabout 20 years ago
FANTASTIC

It really was a cool story.

The build up was fantastic

Keep writing

Ravi

mature2003mature2003about 20 years ago
Nice seduction

Ruby, nicely written and liked the seduction of the nephew. Enjoyed the story and like your style what with a little Bengali thrown to add more spice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
More Please

Really superb! Sensuous..exciting...keep them coming in..

ishtatishtatover 19 years ago
My Gorgeous Hairy Tease

Excellent.Your slow build up with all the doubts and uncertainties was so convincing.Added to that the language contrasts were brilliant - not just the Bengali and the paraphrased thoughts of Meena but Indian English is so effective for a seduction scene.It is a little more formal than either Australian English,American English or even British English, and the courtesy/reserve of your hero somehow fits that to make a very potent mix.Very well done.

You even seem to share my love of hairy women!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
One of the best ever read

This is hot. I just loved the content. It was really natural as this is the way it happens in real life also.

Simply the best ! ! ! !

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
phantastik

Unlike other Indian writers, the buildup is slow and highly erotic.

This could be a great way to learn Bengali.

May your pen never cease writing and may your tribe increase.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Please write more

dear ruby

i have become a dedicated fan of you

your writing has impressed me a lot

they are kinky as well as sensual and have touched my heart

please keep writing and giving us pleasures

your :Adorable Woman Pt. 01" did not followed by part-02

please complete the series

waiting for your submission

your adoring fan.............

Time4moTime4moalmost 17 years ago
Thanks for the story

Hi Ruby, that a geat story. Wow!! Enjoyed it thoroughly and I cummed copiouly after reading it. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
awesome

you've proved that bongs are the ultimate horny women of india ! lovely !

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Fata fati golpo

Ruby pl keep 'it' up wth ur fata fati golpo!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
You are the best

You are the best on literotica. I love to read your stories. Please write more stories. I always check your page to see if something new is available.

Keep your good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
boddo beshi ushno

Being a bengali,22,recently passed out engineer and male and sorrounded by gorgrous aunts all over, you ,kakima;-)have written about my favourite fantasy. Thanx a lot for ur story. Bengali quotations, like yu said ,were hot.Thanx a lot also for not including any crude dialects and Bengali slangs since personally for me its a huge turnoff. Can't wait to read the rest of yur stories.Love,Indranil.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

good but it needs more phisical action,more sex and stuff if u know what i mean.

corte33corte33over 12 years ago
Craftsman

This writer knows how to use the language. Long buildup to climax!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Are you for real??? Ur stories r good and ur pic is even better...

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
A question.

A well written story, I enjoyed it and envy “Babu” It seems, from these stories and stories from other Indian writers, that incest in India is far less forbidden than here in the West. Is that correct?

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