All Comments on 'My Greek God'

Don't write 'haha' in a conversation. You can write it as 'That's exactly what I'm saying Adrian' chuckled/laughed Sterling. Also when a person meets someone new they don't hug them, like Adrian's roommate did. There are other mistakes too, so you should probably find an editor. Other than this, the story is good.

I enjoyed reading this romantic story. I am glad Adrian and Sterling ended up with each other. I only have one negative comment. You sometimes use Adrian's name when you mean Sterling and Sterling's name when you mean Adrian.

I Loved the whole story... plz..PLEASE... continue the story..so we can see there college relationship continue. .. build an Develop...

Great writing. .. (nobodys perfect...it not 4 an epic reward, its an erotic story).. u did great... Looking forward to more from u.. especially about Sterling an Adrian. .

Wow -- Ken turned out to be a disappointment, but Sterling is a gem! Give that young man some hair for his magnificent muscular chest, and Adrian can trace it with his fingers and tongue. Keep them loving each other!

This was not what I expected when I started this story. Please continue this story it was so good.

Very good story :) needs a little editing work

It does need editing work, yet it is a solidly interesting story. Having a good story to tell is the most important thing. Writing skills can be polished. I agree with the other thing gs that have been pointed out. The bigger problem is you switch tenses often. Keep everything in the past tense and it will flow much better. I look forward to their relationship developing.

My heart is still pounding! "He pressed his body down on mine while still shoving his cock in out of me fast and hard. While looking into each other's eyes, his lips fell down onto mine again. This time the kiss was hungry and wild. He was devouring me. I wrapped my arms and legs around him. He buried his face into my neck and began licking and sucking. I dug my nails into his back moaning over and over again. My cock was squeezed between both of us. It was spilling precum over and over again."

five stars great story a nice read. jonathan