All Comments on 'My Halloween Treat...'

by reverendaholic

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sooooo Hot

That was so hot, I'm sweating just reading it. You paint such a great picture. I hope you will write more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
MMMGood

That was a hot story, I wanted to screw one of my teacher's' so I can relate. Keep writing!!!

magnacumlaudemagnacumlaudeover 14 years ago
"You're not in Kansas anymore, baby!"

Extremely erotic. Very well-written with all the literary elements of top-notch storytelling - descriptive detail, finely-drawn characterization, setting, relevant theme, RISING action, CLIMAX, resolution. Bravo! Keep the stories (and me) cumming... ;)

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Short and Sexy

A short and very hot sex story.

hoo_hoo_boohoo_hoo_booover 14 years ago
Thank you!

Beautifully written, the plot was simple but the story was so complete- thank you!

luv2bemeluv2bemealmost 14 years ago
Awesome!

I thought the story was well written, and compelling! I love it!

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