by reverendaholic
That was so hot, I'm sweating just reading it. You paint such a great picture. I hope you will write more soon.
That was a hot story, I wanted to screw one of my teacher's' so I can relate. Keep writing!!!
Extremely erotic. Very well-written with all the literary elements of top-notch storytelling - descriptive detail, finely-drawn characterization, setting, relevant theme, RISING action, CLIMAX, resolution. Bravo! Keep the stories (and me) cumming... ;)
Beautifully written, the plot was simple but the story was so complete- thank you!