All Comments on 'My Hero'

Please continue. So beautiful and raw.

A very good story and good writing too.. Their lives have finally found their destiny..

I loved this story. It's very romantic and sexy. The flow is smooth. There were some typos and at one point what appears to be an incomplete correction. Another proofread would have caught these. I would have liked more of this story. It could be broken into two parts with interaction instead of narrative of the relationship before the fire. It could increase the tension between them that is released at the end. Literally. I really liked this story and I'm going to read more of your submissions right now. Keep writing!

I don't know exactly why but I really enjoyed this tale.

Thx

Thanks

THIS STORY OBVIOUSLY RATES A 5...BUT IT CRIES FOR A SEQUEL! GREAT WRITING!