All Comments on 'My Hot Wife Katie Ch. 03'

by Freddyj881

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
face cream

You randy b.....d! what a dream cum true, but would love to see a site full of cum covered amateur hot wives. Coud really use the link> mmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wife betrayed!

Lied to, disrespected, betrayed. Damn man she should kill your ass. You dont really love your wife at all. Shes just a piece of meat to you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
It was a hot read

Until he decided to put the film on the internet and totaly betrayed her trust. What a complete jerk! Not a very realistic finish.

bgtrkdrvrbgtrkdrvrover 16 years ago
I have to agree

Real good story until the end. I have to agree with the previous two low scoring anonymous comments. I hope you win the $1,500 bucks,.you can use it as a retainer for the lawyer you'll need when your wife divorces your backstabbing ass.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
ending betrayed trust

The story was really good until you turned the male into a right royal cocksucker for posting his wife's semen-face on the internet without her knowledge or permission. What kind of woman-hating piece of crap would think that was a smart thing to do after she said a couple of times that no one else was allowed to see it? No doubt, her face covered with sperm will be a cherished memory for all of her friends and family after they inevitably discover it... please rethink ruining this happy marriage story by turning it into a divorce/ non-consent like you have set it up to be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Husband

The husband is a jerk, she needs to divorce him and sue him for putting the video on the web. Clean his dumb ass out forever. Don't let him ever see the kids again either. What a piece of shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
& You Were Doing So Well Prior To This

The arousing marital trust and respect in your prior stories made this one look worse than sick by comparison.<P>

Your line of perfect "H"s ends on a sick note - by your own choice - dummy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Sucky Ending

Unlike some I realize this is supposed to be a story. The husband is either A: A complete jerk for betraying the wife's trust or B: The dumbest guy on the face of the eart or C: Both A&B.

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I guess it could be a story of the one dumb jerk who would really do this risking everything in court.

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To others: Why assume that these stories are real? I have one hell of an imagination and could post stories that have no factual truth where my real life is concerned.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hey - good luck with the impending divorce

idiots rarely hang on to a good woman for very long.

brfinestbrfinestover 16 years ago
A Great Story

Ok, I can see this as just another opening to their expanding sex lives. She wouldn't suck because he forgot to ask, she didn't want him to lick her pussy, it's too dirty. Now, don't film it; well, don't show it to anyone. Deep down, she's a slutty little wife, she just needs guidance. She may well enjoy one of those "adult" resorts. A safe place to display her body and sex style. Teaching others how sexy she is or even better, letting others show her how to openly enjoy her body and her husband, and maybe a few strangers. Keep going, keep learning and teaching her. Richard

Freddyj881Freddyj881over 16 years agoAuthor
Wow! Sorry to disappoint!

I posted my 3rd story after having the first two being flagged as "hot". I understand that people didn't like the way the story was ended but just wanted to say - this is not a true story - these are people in a story. I didn't film my wife and put it on the internet. I'm not getting divorced and don't need the money from the internet competition - that was all made up. No need to flame me in my email account. I guess i'm flattered that everyone thought this was the real deal. I was just trying to move the story forward and had plans of this being the first of a 3 story arc. Once again - sorry to disappoint everyone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Richard's comment

sums up why this story is getting so many negative, in fact STRONGLY negative comments. He says, "deep down, she's a slutty little wife." He suggests that the husband is merely guiding her along a path she doesn't know she wants to follow. He suggests in future, hubby might introduce her to a couple of strangers. See, this is why so many women hesitate to really open up about their sexual desires. While some women may like being called a slut, all I can say in my experience is that most women DON'T. In fact, many women have a very negative visceral reaction to that word. Sexual goddess = good. Vixen = good. Fucking hot! = good. Slut = iffy at best, disasterous at worst. <br><br>

The scenario Richard described is exactly why so many women are often hesitant to make their more "kinky" preferences known in the marital bed. The last thing they want is their husband saying, oooh baby, you are such a slut. Now, what do you think about bringing in a stranger and I'll film you doing him? <br><br>

The root of any good relationship has to be trust. You have to trust that your partner would not do anything you don't want him/her to do; and in a love relationship, you want to feel like your partner cherishes you. If you are like a majority of women, the words "cherish" and "my slutty wife" don't really go hand in hand. You might wish to be your man's fantasy in the bedroom, but that does not automatically translate into wishing he thought of you as a cheap slut and then presuming to plaster your sexual escapades all over the internet. <br><br>

This is a story, and I see the author is clarifying that it is a work of fiction. As a fantasy, it's a safe release. In reality, 9 times out of 10, it would spell disaster.

lostinnlostinnover 16 years ago

Great series so far. And I loved the ending, as it points the way towards Hotwife territory. But don't rush it, you've handled her transformation so far at just the right pace.

AponeAponeabout 16 years ago
Oh My!!

This is fiction you morons!! Great great desciptions!! A fantasy of mine as well. You are very talented. Please please keep writing!!

maddictmaddictalmost 9 years ago
$ 1500

Bad idea, oh wait were guys.

InosolanInosolanover 6 years ago
Asshole

He is one, and it's going to fuck him up in the long run

huntsman29huntsman29about 5 years ago
Loving wife and shithead husband.

Good story up and until now. Ending kind of ruined it to a degree. What he did is what assholes do to their ex, not what you do to person you are married to. Does he just imagine no-one they know will see it? That it could blow up on to their kids?

Maybe the author has a plan for this turn of events and his betrayal of trust. So I'll reserve judgement, as the story is a good one so far. Still he could easy have worked her into consent for this by talking about how hot watching another girl get a facial had made her, and could she imagine making others get turned on watching her do the same etc.

rodryder44rodryder44about 5 years ago
KAtie Ch 3

I would have done the same thing - uploading the video. It's a voyeur-wanna-be-cuck thing.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
What crap

"Watching her beg for my manliness". Man, you have such a way with words.

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