by Badass24ku
Love it when a husband is proactive in fulfilling his wife's fantasies without the story descending into degradation and/or humiliation for either party, nor pressure for infinite repetition at the husband's expense. Especially when the tale is told from the very appreciative wife's point of view. He gave her a gift. She was grateful.
Well written and executed; the anticipation lies not in what happens--that's a given--but in the mindsets of the two lovers both before AND after she is given what she wished for.
More please.
Premise with possibilities.
But not delivered.
Story, and in particular sex, is told as if the writing is an elementary school "What I did Over The Summer" esssay.
Two stars.
One has to wonder how long it will be before there are other men and then the divorce.
I can see you're new, lots to improve on, but you still told a story pretty well. I actually had the experience you write about. Mine started with us telling each other of true stories of before we met. We were both sexually experienced. That morphed to fantasies that finally culminated with the real thing. Lasted for ten years and I must say a 3 some or 4 some, while busy, were extraordinarily intense. Would do it all over again. Keep writing.
We all know what happens next. Wife decides that she should get all of her fantasies and most of those don’t include moronic hubby. She’ll get all the strange she wants now since he gave her a green light to pursue her desires. We have yet another cuck who will be home all alone while his now slut is out living her fantasies. Couldn’t happen to a nicer guy since he was stupid enough to not remember what happens when you open Pandora’s box and your relationship. Ridiculous
A threesome is one of the most popular fantasies among married couples. So long as you have a strong love bond with your spouse, I suggest couples try it. The story gets 5 stars.