All Comments on 'My Husband's Best Friend Ch. 01'

Meh. Just another slut. Nothing special. At all.

Some wife!

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tomorrow brings a 1*

Present tense sucks! Are you typing while you're doing it?

Spontaneous > planned hotwife adventures!! Very hot!

Meet the next loser to be tossed onto the pile of writers to ignore. As if this lame tale hasn't been spun a thousand times before. I have to question your intelligence thinking something as piss poor as this was the way to introduce yourself. One star is one too many. Sadly there are no negative ratings.

Nice story. We’ll written and erotic.

Rational Rhyme and Reason are important when dealing with skank stories. This will obviously end up as a cuckold story by a skank wife fucking the "best" friend. Why are the "best" friends always such arseholes.

Hot story. Very real too.

Very sexy, keep writing *****

Something similar happened to me. My husband had been out in the garage with his friend, Dan working on his ‘69 Camaro. I was painting our home office and spilled paint on me. I ran to the bathroom, stripping off my paint covered clothes. I heard my husband in the shower. Dan must have left. I thought I would just hop in with him and wash the paint off me. I pulled the curtain back as I was stepping in Dan turned around and jumped. Shit! I had paint running down my arms and even in my hair. I apologized and just kind of bumped him out of the way and got under the spray to begin washing off the paint. I tried to be good, honest, but I soon felt Dans hard dick pressing into my thigh. As I soaped up I grabbed it and jerked him off. It was easier washing his cum off me than the paint.

I liked it. I do wish it was told as recount of an adventure as opposed to present tense though. But that’s a minor thing.

Nothing like all of these so called best friends in these stories. Enemies would make the better patio helpers it seems.

Why was John standing in the bathroom in the middle of the night having a wank? He had his own bedroom.

They just entered a marital minefield, looking but not touching, but her marriage is now on shaky ground. It won't take much to blow it up, but I appreciate the writer's restraint in not doing it, YET. I think the writer shows capability.

Well written start. Do you have more planned? Husband wants a wife filled at both ends? Sharing or cheating? BTB or ....?

Ended too soon ... :)

ROFLMAO

Literally trying a new name, and handing us the same worn out, badly written horse shit that makes odoreater smack his wanker while drolling over the thought of big cock.

And that is NOT a compliment closet clown.

But hey you got the pother cum eating dweebs all hot and bothered thinking of that cock of his.

A delightfully written story that I enjoyed to the point of awarding it 5*'s

bro before hoes........not in this case

Present tense is unpleasant to read.

It was effective because you missed all the usual clichés. I still have to wonder if there's still one loyal best friend in the galley of fictional friends. Good first effort.

Erotic and extremely well written. Ignore the haters. I’m sort of pleased that they do they have this warped need to express themselves; keeps them off the streets.

"dreaming of what tomorrow might bring"...Divorce and a long friendship destroyed maybe? 1*

So many stories sound like stories. I wish more authors were able to generate stories that are plausible in real life. This circumstance is plausible but as is often the case the storyline is rushed. A little more time with character development would help. There was a hint to the idea that was some chemistry between her and the houseguest but it would have been better to understand the people involved and have a gradual buildup of sexual tension. In real life about 50 percent of married women have had sex with someone other than their husband at least once during their marriage. So there are many real life circumstances that lead up to the inevitable sex. I have had sex with guys other than my husband and it has never happened without a build up. So with a little tweaking it could have been better but overall I did enjoy it.

I remember huge parties at massive houses with hundreds of people. Plenty of girlfriends and a good amount of young married wives getting drunk and disappearing for a strange dick . One girl fucked two of my friends in a bathroom with her head in toilet bowl and both shot there loads in her hair with hubby drunk down stairs

If it wasn’t for husband’s best friends and whore wife’s, there wouldn’t be many cuck stories.

Don't take the negative comments to heart. LPN and some of the AnonFriends have it right. This is a well done first effort. However you take it forward, it promises to be nothing short of interesting.

Current rating by Literotica users is 3.92 of 5 or 7.84. This probaby gives a wrong picture because many users siply rate the story a 1.

In my book this story gets a 5- (4.75 = 95%, which is an A or A+).

Mike's wife is a KEEPER.

However

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