All Comments on 'My Husband's Business Partner Ch. 01'

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Really, who cares.

ugh

of the language, I didn't get much past the 3rd paragraph.

Literotican should have rejected this story simply because of that.

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A lot of repetition to the story, going over things that were already explained, But all in all it's a good start of a series. I hope that the next chapter moves along to the goal of her getting fucked by her lover.

Gave you 25% for taking the time to write this. But it is really unreadable due to the intolerable amount of grammar problems. You should really learn the language before you try to write it

yekollu. go ahead.

dont care about the comments.

i am with you. we need indain writer. this is a good start and i hope you will be a great writer in few months.

Your character and plot development are terrific! I look forward to reading more. Much thanks!