All Comments on 'My Husband's Family Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
JEEEEZZUZZ CHRIST ALMIGHTY!!!

for fuck's sake...... would it kill you to make this story long enough in one part for someone to get a boner and not have to go to the "NEXT CHAPTER?" it is a descent story but it is very distracting to stop n start........

csltcsltover 10 years ago
Short Chapters

Not a fan either.

Gave 5 stars, good story.

Just wish there were less chapters.

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