All Comments on 'My Indecent Proposal Ch. 02'

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AccelarVester over 1 year ago

Ugh

Anonymousover 8 years ago

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Anonymousover 10 years ago

I am Genghis Khan of the steppes

The story is well written, but I am sadly unable to appreciate it because it involves secretary exploitation. I don't mind razing villages to the ground, putting my DNA on entire countries I march through, I can appreciate just about anything but secretary exploitation.

That said, the story is indeed well written, tho.

betrayedbylove over 12 years ago

Lousy

You're an asshole!

Anonymousover 12 years ago

A title is good enough, not worth a comment

Sigh

Anonymousover 12 years ago

A copy of a story from an indian manwhore

You are a poor writer and a copycat.This story has been done many times and recycled time and again.for your best effort a 1 would be sufficient.

huedogg over 12 years ago

dont have to wonder why the score is so low

Another freaky, kinky, cuckold loving writer. 1*

Anonymousover 12 years ago

Truly, this is really the "pits."

Sick story. Best just not continued.

chytown over 12 years ago

Nasty Story!!!!!!!

Part 1 was bad this is worst. Sorry I just do not like it.

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Hi People , I am a great fan of literotica and its stories for a long time...and I felt that why not write erotica as I could dream it well...So I would love to share my fetishes through erotica stories down here...luv your comments

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