by Milfson1
the story is very well written, the writer has built up the characters and the story keeps you engrossed and turned on at the same time, the use of Indian words makes the story rustic, will look forward to the next part
If ever there is a part two to this so call incest story, which should have been in another category then the writer of the story should make the son clean the cocks those who fucked his mother and make them hard to fuck her aigain because if he was a self respected man, he would have sent all of them with some hard beating rather than running away and be afraid to go in his own house as if he was a culprit.The writer of the story has written his autobiography.
The next chapter needs to be the son taking over and getting rid of the cousins.
hi, was a nice story to read, you should definitely carry it on but for this part at least, it should be in a different category like Voyeur for example. I would imagine the reader was expecting mother to seduce her son, it is what i was thinking as i read.
a second part could be fun to read but i fear that the loss of innocence would have an impact on the quality of the sequel, should there be one.